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Writer's pictureIELTS Compassion

IELTS WRITING on 02/11/2019:

Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like.

What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world?

How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?



It goes without saying people have invariably desired to build up and live in an ideal society, on which opinions are truly divided. From my own perspective, education is the most pivotal factor in creating such a society and to achieve this, governments and individuals both have a key role to play.


To commence with, education is most significant element when it comes to the development of a perfect society for it fosters other aspects of society. First of all, the security and stability of a community can be ensured by how citizens are educated. It holds true that only when the citizens adhere to the social norms and regulations can a society be free of heinous criminals. Education teaches people how to respect these ethical norms and behave in a proper way, which is a foundation for the safety of society. Not to mention, education can undoubtedly improve the quality of life by equipping people with an essential grasp of life. With the transmission of knowledge, people stand a better chance to get a decent job to fulfil their demands and head for technological breakthroughs for the betterment of the entire community.


In order to maintain a perfect society, this chief concern should be fulfilled by the central roles of the authorities and the individuals. As for the governments, measures should be taken to elevate the quality of the education system by providing professional trainings for teachers, allocating resources for infrastructure of classrooms and so forth. Besides, they are integral to the eradication of education inequalities, with the social subsidies and financial aid for disadvantaged children. When it comes to the citizens, they must be conscious of their benefits of education and make the most of the chance to sharpen their perspectives. To be more specific, citizens, as learners, should be active and well-prepared for knowledge exchange, which would gravitate them towards further advancements.


All things considered, I personally place great emphasis on education in constructing an impeccable society. To my mind, in other to attain such society, efforts should be made by everyone to foster the quality of education.


Vocabulary Highlights:

General Vocabulary:

- divided (adj): very different [rất khác nhau]

- foster (v): to encourage the development [vun đắp sự phát triển]

- well-prepared (adj): ready [sẵn sàng]


Topic: Society and Laws

- adhere to (v): to continue to obey a rule [tuân thủ]

- heinous criminals (n): shockingly bad people who commit a crime [những tên tội phạm xấu xa]

- ethical norms (n): ethically accepted standards of behaving [chuẩn mực đạo đức]

- a decent job (n): a job which is socially good [một công việc tốt trong xã hội]

- social subsidies (n): money given by the society to encourage something to happen [trợ cấp xã hội]

- an impeccable society (n): a society with no problems or bad parts [một xã hội hoàn hảo]


Topic: Education

- transmission of knowledge (n): the act of providing audience knowledge [sự truyền tải kiến thức]

- elevate the quality of education system (v): to make the education system better [nâng cao chất lượng hệ thống giáo dục]

- the eradication of educational inequalities (n): the act of eliminating unfairness in education [việc xóa bỏ những bất bình đẳng trong giáo dục]

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